FanFic: Evening Falls By Renaissance (T) Updated 7/9

**LovesEdward** · Onyx Vampire Joined: 26 Mar 2008 Posts: 244 Location: Utah

W.O.W. is all I can say about this latest chapter!

LOVED it! Smile

Left you love at FF! Smile

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"Hadn't you noticed? I'm breaking all the rules now." Twilight pg. 199

(The daughter of a newborn vamp named: ome!)

**sideadde** · Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 6:49 am Post subject:

Finally!

I've almost forgotten the forum...Thank goodness for the little email reminder.

This chapter was so wonderful. So many good lines, such tension...you're a master.

Thank you so much for the shoutout! My only "fear" is getting your little fangirl! Her comments are as amusing as a crackfic.
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**Lolawid** · Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2008 9:02 am Post subject:

Ok ladies, what's this about a little fangirl? Do I want to know?

I have to say, that Ava's wedding night was exactly what I was picturing it to be in BD!!! You RoCkEd that!!! I'm sorry, but that whole Isle Esme was off... I like that they stayed "home" and enjoyed their bed with no spectators. And the family all got to participate in making the evening special for them. Thank you, thank you, thank you for that!! Looking forward to more B/E married life, and to see what happens in this new phase of Elisa and the Cullens!! Write on, oh ye goddess of fanfics!! (Yeah, I'll have to say that you, siDEADde, and Enthralled have really spoiled me. Your stories are wonderful!!)
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**Renaissance** · Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2008 11:06 am Post subject:

Thank you all for your awesome comments, ladies! You rock and you keep me writing. I am so happy y'all liked The Storm...I was SO nervous about writing that but happy with how it came out. And irony of ironies...after I had summarized and begun this chapter, but was stuck with writer's block, I was woken up in the middle of the night by thunder so loud it set off all the car alarms on our street. I figured it was a sign, so I hauled my tired arse out of bed and finished the chapter. Laughing

Chapters posted during the lockdown:

Chapter Nine: Dare You To Move
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4245654/9/Evening_Falls

Someone unexpected helps Bella through her last minute cold feet before the wedding ceremony.

Chapter Ten: Bittersweet Heaven
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4245654/10/Evening_Falls

Edward's and Elisa's view of the wedding ceremony and a last few goodbyes.

Chapter Eleven: The Storm
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4245654/11/Evening_Falls

Bella and Edward's wedding night...

**LovesEdward** · Onyx Vampire Joined: 26 Mar 2008 Posts: 244 Location: Utah

**Renaissance** · Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 4:19 am Post subject:

**sideadde** · Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 5:06 am Post subject:

Baha..branded by Bella.

Oh I just love that little Elisa. She's a damn riot.
Can't wait! I need something else to read to keep me away from my own story!
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**LovesEdward** · Onyx Vampire Joined: 26 Mar 2008 Posts: 244 Location: Utah

**Renaissance** · Posted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 4:24 am Post subject:

Thanks so much! Very Happy

I feel terrible that it's not done yet but I think this is going to be another big one. A couple more random quotes:

All those things that I used to care about, clothes, boys, friends, school, back when I was still Elisa Jensen from San Diego, had been lost in my grief for my family and my old life. It was an odd feeling to regain some of that back, like I'd been torn apart and now was reassembling myself, piece by piece. It seemed inevitable that some of the pieces would be missing or distorted by now...it caused another wave of half-excitement, half-apprehension in me to realize that the Elisa I was putting back together was someone I really didn't know yet.

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I calculated the odds of my survival if I gave in to the urge to spray paint 'Jasper Hale Sucks!' on his shiny silver motorcycle and had to admit it didn't look good.

**Lolawid** · Posted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 5:36 pm Post subject:

OOOOhhhhh!! Shocked

Great teasers! Can't wait for the new chapter!!
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**sideadde** · Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 11:12 am Post subject:

Arrrrugh *gnashes teeth in frustration*
I can't wait any longer! Don't make me come out there and force you to post it, half-finished.

If I can get that steaming pile of a chapter posted after almost 3 weeks of farting around...you can too!
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**Renaissance** · Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 7:08 pm Post subject:

**sideadde** · Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 9:42 pm Post subject:

Yay! Gleeful!

Leah is good too. Just something...anything but these teasers!

Can't wait!
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**Lolawid** · Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 4:28 pm Post subject:

Ummm, ok, yoo-hooo, where is Elisa? Is she hiding? I thought she had something to say? Hmmmm? And Alice seems to be M.I.A. also... hmmm, what should I do now? Can't Sleep

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**lanamoosh** · Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 4:48 pm Post subject:

Lola.. I'm "wid" you (ba dum dum)...

Most of my fav fan fics seem to be stuck! It's like someone has come down and abducted all the people with stories in their heads! What's going on! Call out the coast guard.. we need more Elissa!

-L
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